There I thought I had made the Prologue shorter (and better) and it turns out that the edited version is 124 words longer than the Nano-version. Hello?!?

I’ll leave it at that for now and will go over it again tomorrow to see if I can shorten it here and there.

4 Responses to “WTF?”

  1. dfrucci Says:

    Good luck on making it shorter

  2. sirayn Says:

    Is it better now? Because if it is, don’t make a big deal out of the length. 🙂

  3. nymeria87 Says:

    Oh yes it is 😀 But I want to cut a little here and there to make it snappier 🙂

  4. dfrucci Says:

    Ahh thats a good plan, I like nice and snappy prologues

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